Sunday 22^nd October

Critique

I was supposed to be reading this to apply a critical overview of what I have done so far, instead I am appending and fixing. This is probably wrong, so I will stop and highlight my thoughts.

1. To long, will needed much thinning, pruning.
2. I need to add more references to relevant excerpts from authors and publications.
3. I need to add a bibliography of things I have read to support my journal.
4. Ordering and layout may not be suitable for marking. Produce another format for publication rather than a blog, ideally Web page or Word Hypertext, I need to be able to produce a readable hard copy.
5. Better labelling
6. I feel I need to be more concise in relating my current experiences while on the course, and how my outlook is changing and how I am applying this theology to every day life.
7. Do I need to put less of my own, and more of the Theologians?
8. I could continue with the what type of theologian am I bit as mentioned at the top and measure my self again, perhaps having a rating of myself for each of the four types. What I felt I was then and now, and then try again towards the end of the course.
9. Compare my thoughts against what Paul might say! Eek scary. (E-minus start again)
10. Be prepared to dump things, and create a fresh! (don’t use it because it’s there)
11. I need to highlight the four principles in relationship together “Scripture, Tradition, Reason, Experience” How together they can support and ascertain “Theology”

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